1950's sitting pose piece

as missed off previous post, here is the picture that should go with it.
I was trying to get the 1950's poster feel, where its part painted !

My 1950's piece

Here is my 1950's piece finished what do you think?

project : Mark Marking

I've done some of the next project whilst on holiday, though i haven't finished it !!

1950'S Moodboard

Here's an updated version of the 1950's moodboard, hopefully its more colourful